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           STUDENTS' ESSAYS 1
                                      My Role Model













                 # Some of these writings are students' essays written during the process assessment of the 3rd graders.



                                ELON MUSK                                                          MARY SEACOLE


                                                                                 I chose Mary Seacole as my role model because I want to
                                                                               major in nursing. Mary Seacole was a nurse on the front line
                                                                               during the Crimean War. She was a pioneering nurse and a
                                                                               remarkable woman known for her significant contributions on
                                                                               the battlefield. Seacole's dedication to nursing and ability to
                                                                               overcome social barriers have made her a symbol of courage
                                                                               and resilience in the face of adversity. However, she faced
                                                                               rejection from all nursing groups, including the Nightingale
                                                                               Nursing Corps, due to racism. She was an Afro-American.
                                                                                 Nevertheless, she took her own risk and worked on the
                                                                               front line, caring for the soldiers who regarded her as
                                                                               their mother. Later, she returned to Jamaica, where people
                                                                               respected her as a 'Saint' for her care and treatment of the
                                                                               people living in the slum. She was not lonely in her death,
                                                                               surrounded by those she had helped and supported.
                                                                                 She is remembered as a pioneering nurse, humanitarian,
                                                                               and a symbol of hope, breaking barriers and inspiring future
                                                                               generations. I also want to become a dedicated nurse like
                                                                               her, overcoming adversity and prejudice.

          I chose Elon Musk as my role model. Elon Musk is a                                                       30516 Lee, Jeongyeon
        beacon of inspiration for countless aspiring entrepreneurs
        worldwide. Remarkable entrepreneurial ventures, including
        PayPal, SpaceX, and Tesla, marked Elon Musk's successful
        journey. His ability to identify opportunities enabled him
        to create companies that have redefined industries.
          Despite his remarkable successes, Musk's path was
        challenging. When he was young, Elon Musk experienced
        a difficult childhood due to his unique personality, which
        led to him being bullied by his peers. Nevertheless, he
        was not depressed and said he learned much from the
        difficulty. He encountered numerous challenges, including
        financial setbacks, technical obstacles, and skepticism
        from critics. However, he has been taking progressive
        actions. For example, he launched rockets toward Mars,
        which turned to failure. He embraces failures as learning
        opportunities, analyzing setbacks to identify weaknesses
        and areas for improvement.
          I admire Elon Musk's passion and perseverance in life.
        He never gave up on pursuing his dreams and eventually
        became the CEO of a globally renowned company named
        Tesla. He continues to innovate and always keeps pursuing
        groundbreaking work. Now, He has become an icon of
        innovation.



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